JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 29

I think that parents should not face jail time for missing their child's conference. One reason is that it is not that big of a deal to miss a school confeerence meeting. Another is that it is not as bad as killing someone. They should just ask the parents to seek out the ability to come to them. They would not put the resource that they need to find killers into finding parents that missed a school conference. In conclusion I think that parents should not face jail time that they just need to make a transfermation in their lifes, and make everything about their kids education

Trayvon Martin Paragraph

I think that the shooting of Trayvon Martin is relevant to my life because that could have been me walking with my hood because I like to wear my hood, and I'm look Mexican. Also it is because I'm a seventeen year old boy that could be in the wrong place at the wrong time. Another reason is that there could be somebody just like that and I could get shoot for being colored and wearing a hood at night because I look like a "threat". I think that me and him are the same in almost every way it is just that I'm not dead because I'm was wearing a hood and am colored.

Zombies vs Vampires Blog Post Paragraph

I would rather be attacked by a vampire. One reason is if the vampire wins I would be a vampire. The next reason is that I would live forever and never have to think about dying. The last reason is that I would be able to hide really good at night. So I think that being attacked by a vampire would be better.

Testing Thoughts Blog Paragraph

Do you think it is fair that high school students must pass an English and math test to graduate?
I thought that is was fair because it shows how much you have learned in school. The test really was not that hard it was just what we learned in middle school so I really thought that it was fair that they gave us this test. I don't think that we should have to take the test to graduate because we already have to take a lot of other test to pass high school. So for that I think that it is not fair to be giving us a test that we have to pass so that we pass high school.

Week 26 Practice Paragraph

Would you want a car that drives itself? Words: -method -occur -proceed


I would not like a car that drives itself because it could be very dangerous. I think if that ever occurred that the cars would start to take over the world. I think that it would be better to not proceed with making the car because of the damage that it could do. If this ever happened then a lot of methods that people have came up with to make money would be gone. The jobs would be taken from people and we would have less jobs. So on that note I don't think that we should have cars that can drive them selfs.