SS1 JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment

I feel that "get rich fast" schemes do not work. For example the schemes might not make it when they register it. Another one was that a proportion of the people don't need the things that they have for the get rich schemes. Also the schemes don't work because they also don't work right. In conclusion, I dont think that the get rich fast schemes work because the comsumers don't fall for them.

Bless Me, Ultima Reading A

People do not seem to want to hurt each other when they are in a group. For example when you are in a group you feel that people want you so you wouldnt hurt yourself. Another reason is that you want to have fun with the people in  your group. In all I dont think that someone would hurt themself when they are in a group cause they want to have fun with the people that are in the group.

Greatest High School Obstacle

The greatest High School Obstacle that I had to over come is having good behavor. I have always been a bad student so I wanted to start to be a good student by having good behavor. This is the best cause all I wanted to do durning school was have fun ,and be the one the gets the teacher mad.

Personal Changes

When I was a freshmen I was a bad student cause I wouldn't listen to the teachers. Also I would get into a lot of fights will other students because they would say something bad about my family. I also had no self control of myself. Now I have learned to listen to my teachers cause they are the ones that are trying to help me in my life. I now know that fighting someone is not the way to go because an anger mind is a narrow mind. I now have learned how to control my behavor ,and I'm not mean to everybody I don't know. I have change in many different ways but the biggest one with the way I feel about my dad.

SPA Policy Blog Paragraph

One policy that I wish could be changed is the curfew time because i feel that they don't give us time to hang out and be teens. I feel like they try to control our lives because they tell us what to do how to do it and when we have to come inside. I feel that they treat us like kids when we are young adults. So I feel that should change the curfew so that we can learn to be young adults.

Week 31 PP

-achieve -compute -specific
Parents of teen vandals shouldn't be held responsible for their child's damage. One reason why is that the parents are not the ones the made the mistake. Another is that the should be held responsible for their own behavor. Also they need to start to grow up sometime. In conclusion, the teen should be the ones paying for their own mistake.

Spring Break Blog Paragraph

Describe the most memorable day of Spring Break.


The most memorable day of Spring Break was when Z said my name for the first time. I could not stop talking about it is was the only thing on my mind at the time. There are no words that can explain how I felt because it was one of the best things that has happened to me. That was the most memorable days of my Spring Break.  I don't think that anything that happened during Spring Break could top that.